lil one’s blog

February 2, 2009 kristan303

Based off of the comments that I received I do pretty much agree with all of them. Although, there was still some I don’t quite understand/agree with. I was a little confused about the comment saying that I sounded like a kid in my writing because I thought the whole point of the assignment was to make it sound like the character you are writing about,which I was a little boy. Therefore I didn’t use other (“big”)words because I don’t really see a 5yr. old talking very advanced, which I guess does make my character a poor choice. I will take the comment for using the thesaurus for my future writing assignments. I do agree that I need to take a little more time when writing, be more descriptive and add more details.